Rhythm Of You Part One Comments

nice writing, a rhythm of two hearts beat together. good job.

The rhythm to this lyrical poem beat like the rhythm of the heart-it has a hip-hop beat. It's a beautiful poem/song. a 10 for sure.

nice.. im likingit.................

It is nice poem that elucidated the love of a man to a woman. A lovely poem.10! Read mine 'Late Love' thanks

Well, this definatly has a rhythm to it! ! So much rhythm that i'm giving you a 10! ! ! ! ^^

had to give you a 10, just for the creative way you used your poem, as a rhythm, yet not make it out to a beat like for a song..i believe all poetry has its own ryhthm.also placed it on my fav list, my sister liked it alot, and so did i

Words have a beat to them.

a fine moving piece.........fine diction in a free verse form...10+++

I like the rhythm of your poem. As you continue to write it will come together. Very good write and thanks for the invite. Your friend Lynn Take a look at my A Faded Rose.

What a poem full of passion and excitement! You're very goon in expression...keep writing :)