Sunday, July 31, 2011

Rhythm Of The Rain Comments

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I'm sitting in the window,
Staring at the gloomy sky,
Thinking of nothing,
As time passed by.
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ANGEL LAYL
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Ency Bearis 29 October 2011

Great thoughts how you write this simile of emotion to rain, nice piece. Read my - Gentle Rain - I like to compose about nature, and love rain.

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Angel Layl 01 August 2011

Thank you... Rain always brings back unwanted memories... So nostalgic...

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No Ones Bidness 31 July 2011

loved the poem it exactly describes the atmosphere when it rains and how it makes you fell BTW love the title

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Hans Vr 31 July 2011

This is very well written. You have a very bright poetic talent. The poem is full of feeling, in almost perfect harmony witht he images used.

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