Rhythm Of Life! ! ! Comments

All true, you said in the poem. Aapi, considering our real cause of breathing, the joys and worries become different, and also what we call it Tension.

Life, in fact is a finer blend of gloom and glee Nice wording. An excellent poem for encouragement and positive think. Tfs

OK, life is 2 sided: up-down, happy-sad, in-out, until you find out who you are, after that just giving thanks, gratefulness, goodness to all, understanding all why they are for what they are. Wishing you the best.

Life, in fact is a finer blend of gloom and glee; Wow! ! ! ! I like this line..... 'tis my life....top marks! ! !

Life is a composition, balancing the bitter with the sweet - all things considered. The balance is necessary. For example, it’s good to be able to smile during the bitter times; that’s what gets us through. A good poem for encouragement. : -)

This is the truth. Many people lives that way. When we loose the ego, which can be hurt, see everybody as a child of God, then we can find true happiness ALWAYS.

Doom and gloom, happy and sad. A great write

Life, in fact is a finer blend of gloom and glee; life again is a canned send of bonds yet free. beautiful poem...sagacious, written with an awareness of the deeper turmoils that the sky spins on Adams progeny. loved it...kudos... :)

Life as a blend of gloom and glee is so true - very meaningful write.

Just a nice tune that we shall read again, nice write Shahzia_Soul

Compact and impregnated with the elements called in life

what can be said as a comment on this lovely poem, ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ? ? ? ? ? ? ? , i believe and strongly believe that poems like RHYTHM OF LIFE should be just read with a feather touch given by the readers' eyes, , ears, , and heart, , i am afraid many at times this one-liner comments tamper and tarnish the marvel and beauty of the' rhythm of life '.enjoyed this poem thoroughly, , shahzia is not only a wonderful literary critic but also a wonderful literary artist :) thanx

Joy and woe are woven fine.If we can keep pace with this rhythm, happiness will be at our door.Loved it.

A mild smile hiding the mist of grief. Very strong words in such a gentle insightful poem.

When I was young I cried every second I found, but when somebody came by, I was ready to smile. That smile stuck on me, now I do not have to cry anymore, I can be kind and smiling all the time. It is a good feeling.

Presenting the rhythm of life in its fullest.how sweet it would be if everyone could have a better understanding between eachother and smile in its fullest.

BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL. NICE COMPOSE. I ADORE YOUR FEELINGS. GREAT WRITE. WHY NOT MORE THAN 10?