Rhythm Of Life Comments

Nodoubt the modern science is noble And can be compared with doctrines spiritual. It vouches ' all that glitters is not gold' only the thing is to accept it we must be bold.....outstanding conceptualization. Beautiful poem is shared amazingly. Thanks again.10

Modern man pursues joy through materialism Involves in position where pity he can not claim. Instead of means as the end he accepts money Runs after it, throught life to be seized by agony.....yes, agony is the route causes. A beautiful oem nicely executed.

A genuine joy we get from the beauty supreme Nodoubt the modern science is noble And can be compared with doctrines spiritual. Runs after it, throught life to be seized by agony. such great truths of life, materialism, money, science, the simple wonder of the nature and of the sublime presence of God. thank u dear poet. tony

Instead of means as the end he accepts money Runs after it, thought life to be seized by agony.....pragmatic expression! An adorable piece of poetry! (10)

Many, many stars are really roaming in the galaxy and we cannot count or imagine. Achievement of science still does not able to convey exact truth about many stars. Modern Age is witnessed by grasping materialism but really truth and happiness lie on God only. We should all proceed to God......10

A clear night! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful and thought provoking poem. Enjoyed reading it. Yes science has taken some of the beauty or I would say softer emotions away from us, but still I feel understanding some thing can not diminish its power. It should make us more appreciative of its charm and existence. This charm and existence is not created by science and it surely can not take it away.

Hi, Ratnakar, I agree with your, The new discoveries have revealed many secrets of of universe, but made man more materialistic and driven us away from honesty, truth and human values. Thanks for sharing.

I just met Paul Arnod this past month and I can only concur with his assessment of your poem, and its movement toward a celebration of traditional cultural values. But you honor science in the opening stanza and treat its achievements with respect even though you fear further abuses.

Hi Ratnakar, A fantastic description of the world I would love to live in. I despise many of these modern values which are highly ungodly and cause more pain than joy. Thank you for this hymn of freedom. Greetings, Paul

Wow, Ratnakar, this is fantastic. It couldn't be more true! Modern man does pursue joy through materialism. I love the nod to Tolkien in your poem too. Thanks for sharing.