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The ‘rhythm of heaven’ (likened to a symphony) , remains a mystery. And though, by searching, men seek to know, understand and find it out - all the searching is in vain because it is hidden from us. Again, brilliant writing. Thank you.

i enjoyed your choice of words used within this poem.......its appealing and visual

I believe that you are saying that we are in that 'rhythm of heaven' as it is universal. That which is simple can be quite complex. Thank you for inviting me to read your work. Your command of language stretches mine.

Very complex. But very beautiful as well.

Dear sir, I hardly understood your poem. It is rich of ancient English literature words. But I think you mean by your words (between the lines) ..: As silence seems to croon on rune of void Eclipse of sun radiates whole universe Sometimes we hopelessly try to hide our feelings We stand like the moon against the sun radiations Not to let the world know the truth our deep strong feelings Our love is like the sun no clouds can hide it neither the moon can do. Still the truth shines the truth of love the truth of life. Even the water drops can not change the salty taste of the ocean. The wide ocean where we are thirsty floating with our dreams and our will Hoping to reach the shore where we wish to find the eternal happiness. Thank you for inviting me to read your poem. It would be very nice of you reading some of my humble poetic essays. And please feel free to comment or to advise the way you like.

Too much metaphors has two sides; it can lost a reader from the 'rhythm' of reading, or it can amused the pondering minds of the nerds. Well, I like the paradoxical element with 'the eclipse of sun radiates whole universe'. I think it is the core of the poem.

If you'll forgive the rather mundane metaphor, if this poem were a woman she'd be a movie star. Alive with color and drama. Would not surprise me if you could see words as colors (or with coloring) when you wanted. Along with high minded imagery, noble. Cannot say I understand a poem this condensed without some time spent on it, for, it is beauty condensed and not to be set up in the mind effortlessly. Again a mundane correlation occurs to me: it is like an automobile admirer coming upon a Rolls Royce: he does not pass it by with a mere glance, and may even stop to study it. Which is what I will do here. Poems like this are like small paintings by a famous painter. I have all these metaphors yet I still could not say I have arrived at an understanding or grasp of it - but then I cannot say i quite understand Picasso either. Right off the bat, ten for coloring and imagery.

Very eloquent indeed! You are a very good writer, keep it up.

Depicts lots of hue and colour. Loved it.

very nice, deep with soul, nice write, i enjoyed it

Rhythm of heaven reflected by rainbow of love is blue ever on green pasture! Nice and colourful poem to read!

and then the poet made a colourful one.... a crescendo to our soul.. dusts beneath and beyond feels eternity each precipitates of blue enligtens soul dew drops

A Symphony of your words radiates throughout the poem. A beautifully written poem of love. I give you a 10. Lynn

The rhythm of your words could be heard while reading the poem aloud. Highly philosophical, indeed.

Liked it very much highly philosophical poem about love...title is very attractive...

I could hear the rythm when your words started flowing into my ears

Profound Poetry, very pilosophical.Catchy title-i like.

Light of Love brought down with such ease n intensity..

great philosophical poem about love...lovely to read.. 10/10/10 Mari