Rhythm Is My Passion! Comments

there will be more rhythm in one's passion if one composes poems which RHYME Silent poetry can't be heard here i came across a silent poet who does not comment but says his this and that is published who will believe him is he living in a FOOLS PARADISE only tell me NR

Let it break out, Naila. Beautiful poem. I love the passion. The seed of flower is so filled with the need to express beauty that it easily breaks through the cement of a parking lot to spout and bloom, standing lonely but straight shining its own magnificence.

I have a rhythm in my mind A tune in my veins And lyric in my mouth Embedded with fun and chorus.. you are a real poetess dear Naila . you are writing such poems at your very young age....... go on writing please. do not stop. you will become a great poetess.. tony

A lovely poem, indeed, nicely penned.

your poetry is exquisitely good i have read the latest of you thank you and posted one a warning for teens i have the darker side of the world seen 10 points for urs also NR

very beautifully put across colourful and lucky we they are making our you tubes see mine also thanks why no poems all these days

Just flow with that rhythm.....! ! Life has several gifts unopened....the jackpot is waiting...! ! Best of luck....! !

Naila, such a well penned poem......................10++++++++++++++