Tuesday, September 1, 2015

Rhythm And Rhyme Comments

Rating: 4.8

Do not ask the whys and wherefores of rhythm and rhyme
But only the how and when from those more poem incline.

My secret in the writing is, do it late on a murky night
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Loke Kok yee
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Akhtar Jawad 12 April 2018

Enjoyed the humor of this poem.

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loke kok yee 14 April 2018

Thank you sir, glad you like it

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 December 2017

A poem so joyful with rhythm and rhyme can only be written by a sweet poet like Loke. Do come back to write more and more such lovely poems, Loke.

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Loke Kok Yee 03 January 2018

Thanks Geeta, you are too kind, I will

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Simone Inez Harriman 24 March 2017

I love your lighthearted write on writing poetry and capturing those creative moments. I can relate to stormy nights, lack of sleep, and a mulleted brain from a late night, night shift......10

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Loke Kok Yee 24 March 2017

Thank you Simone, this was one of my earlier attempts in the art; glad you like it.

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Valsa George 18 September 2015

Yes, it is in the stillness of the night, when everyone is asleep that a poet's heart gets filled with new ideas and he puts them into rhyming verse! Only when our heart is at rest and free of other occupations that poetry comes! Thanks for sharing!

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Chinedu Dike 10 September 2015

Lovely train of thought, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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