Tuesday, September 30, 2014

Rhyming Love Comments

Rating: 4.9

In the folds of night as a wave, you came
Charioted in a filmy dream
All night you were with me
And in love's uncharted land, we roamed
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 January 2018

Sweet rhymes of love is really pleasant to listen and this poem is excellently penned. Looking into the corners, eyes with Divine vision capture tenderness for life. Ocean of hope rises like sun rises in East. Very beautiful poem this is and this reflects love beautifully....10

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 March 2017

That silvery night! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Geetha Jayakumar 09 October 2014

Beautiful, Romantic poem. This poem add sweetness to lips, though like a lovely dream, it may fade away like dew drops by the morning. I loved reading each lines. Beautifully presented.

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Valerie Dohren 04 October 2014

Very passionate and romantic. A lovely read.

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Chris Zachariou 03 October 2014

Beautiful, passionate and wonderfully written. Your poetry always lifts me. Thank you so much.

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Amitava Sur 03 October 2014

A lovely trance with deep love and romance with love's sweet benediction... very nice

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Dinesan Madathil 01 October 2014

Poems often have their mysterious elements wrapped in the devices that fit best to them. Here is a poem unraveling the mystery of 'rhyming love' that sans any element of hypocrisy or prejudice and its literary glow teems with amazing refreshness of the kind. Valsa madam, you have added another feather to your cap of fine poetry that has long been on your head.. Truly spendid! Here is my 10 marks for you.

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Sandra Feldman 01 October 2014

Remarkable. Like a fine perfume, Love intoxicates the room. Ravishingly Romantic, Unforgettable! ...........

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Paul Sebastian 01 October 2014

Such intense of love flowering into passionate love making - birthright of true lovers. An epitome of love. Great write with flowing stream of words culminating into blissfulness. I enjoyed it.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 October 2014

Someone asked me, a few years ago, you are an Accountant and a poet, aren't these two fields are entirely different. I replied every thing in this universe is a poetry, some times it it is riming and some times independent. Accounting is also a poetry. When I get the trail balance agreed and the Assets side levels with the Liabilities side, it appears a poetry to me.similarly our desires, our emotions, and our readiness to sacrifice something for our beloved are in harmony our love is rimed and the moment of love becomes a poetry. A nice write Valsa!

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Mohammad Skati 30 September 2014

True love by a true and genuine poetess. Very true feelings and emotions. I feel this poem greatly. Thanks.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 September 2014

Dreams are charming almost feeling real. Poem brought out that beautiful feeling which often fades when one wakes up. Enjoyed every line. Thank you.

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Abekah Emmanuel 30 September 2014

That is the Romantic Prof. herself describing a romantic night with such passion and beauty as the love expressed in the poem.Mmmmh, How i wish my night with 'the princess' would just turn out like this.haaa! Beautiful and a very nicely written poem. Well done Prof!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 30 September 2014

Imagination, rhyming and romanticism all at their best.....Valsa......nicely scripted with nice and loving words...... great write as always

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Patricia Grantham 30 September 2014

A very romantic and sensous poem. You wrote this with such passion and wantoness. Very delightful poem.

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Ramesh Rai 30 September 2014

Not only rhyming love but romanticism also flows over the entire write. An incredible imagination.

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Gajanan Mishra 30 September 2014

sweetness of lips, good writing, thanks.

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