In the folds of night as a wave, you came
Charioted in a filmy dream
All night you were with me
And in love's uncharted land, we roamed
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Beautiful, Romantic poem. This poem add sweetness to lips, though like a lovely dream, it may fade away like dew drops by the morning. I loved reading each lines. Beautifully presented.
Beautiful, passionate and wonderfully written. Your poetry always lifts me. Thank you so much.
A lovely trance with deep love and romance with love's sweet benediction... very nice
Poems often have their mysterious elements wrapped in the devices that fit best to them. Here is a poem unraveling the mystery of 'rhyming love' that sans any element of hypocrisy or prejudice and its literary glow teems with amazing refreshness of the kind. Valsa madam, you have added another feather to your cap of fine poetry that has long been on your head.. Truly spendid! Here is my 10 marks for you.
Remarkable. Like a fine perfume, Love intoxicates the room. Ravishingly Romantic, Unforgettable! ...........
Such intense of love flowering into passionate love making - birthright of true lovers. An epitome of love. Great write with flowing stream of words culminating into blissfulness. I enjoyed it.
Someone asked me, a few years ago, you are an Accountant and a poet, aren't these two fields are entirely different. I replied every thing in this universe is a poetry, some times it it is riming and some times independent. Accounting is also a poetry. When I get the trail balance agreed and the Assets side levels with the Liabilities side, it appears a poetry to me.similarly our desires, our emotions, and our readiness to sacrifice something for our beloved are in harmony our love is rimed and the moment of love becomes a poetry. A nice write Valsa!
True love by a true and genuine poetess. Very true feelings and emotions. I feel this poem greatly. Thanks.
Dreams are charming almost feeling real. Poem brought out that beautiful feeling which often fades when one wakes up. Enjoyed every line. Thank you.
That is the Romantic Prof. herself describing a romantic night with such passion and beauty as the love expressed in the poem.Mmmmh, How i wish my night with 'the princess' would just turn out like this.haaa! Beautiful and a very nicely written poem. Well done Prof!
Imagination, rhyming and romanticism all at their best.....Valsa......nicely scripted with nice and loving words...... great write as always
A very romantic and sensous poem. You wrote this with such passion and wantoness. Very delightful poem.
Not only rhyming love but romanticism also flows over the entire write. An incredible imagination.
Sweet rhymes of love is really pleasant to listen and this poem is excellently penned. Looking into the corners, eyes with Divine vision capture tenderness for life. Ocean of hope rises like sun rises in East. Very beautiful poem this is and this reflects love beautifully....10