Saturday, August 20, 2005

Rhyme Comments

Rating: 3.3

Rhyme and meter
totter, teeter,
those who do
(maybe you?) .
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 20 August 2005

I like the rhythm...you can sort of feel a beat behind it...Good write.

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Uriah Hamilton 20 August 2005

This poem flows and works perfectly, H.

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Allan James Saywell 20 August 2005

i like these meter maid's here on the goldcoast gets my mind of poetry Warm regards allan

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