Friday, July 10, 2009

Rhyme Or Reason Comments

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When I read modern poetry,
I feel I’m lost in time.
Its meanings and its flow I see,
But where is beat and rhyme?
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Paul C. Maybury Jr.
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Deborah Cromer 10 July 2009

I read your poem. I like it. If you are serious, I have some rhymes you might like to know about? Your title attracted me to your works! Nice job. DC

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Bob Gibson 10 July 2009

We must be from the old school Paul, because I'm the same as you! I sit here gong through the alphabet, cos i like rhyming too there's some very clever poets here, some I don't understand its not the words so much they use, without rhyming they sound bland like your style Paul

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Paul C. Maybury Jr.

Paul C. Maybury Jr.

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