Saturday, September 9, 2006

'Rhyme Crime' Grime Comments

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jobless are we,
cant you see,
time is sold free,
from sky to sea,
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achal agrawal
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Trade Martin 11 September 2006

Achal, I just happened to read your tutorial poem. Thanks for the innovative rhyming pointers, we all appreciate it....! ! ! Best, T.M..

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Kee Thampi 11 September 2006

why dont you quit, you have no wit, go and sit, make ur brain lit, it doesnt fit, bury yourself in a pit, missed honesty in writings makes this a nice poem

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Preeti - is here! 10 September 2006

Achal, you've showed us the rhymes in this cute lil' poem. why don't you put a? instead of! after got it..just a suggestion. Preets

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Catastrophe King 09 September 2006

Thats what wud be known as stinking rhyme....

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