Wednesday, January 28, 2009

Rhyme **** Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have not seen,
nor dreamed
that YOU could be
a being,
...
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Fay Slimm 29 January 2009

Good rhyme and loved some of the phrases - - especially 'open season to your heart' - - - you have aplomb ..... giving you top marks...... Fay.10+ + +

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Fiona Davidson 28 January 2009

You have such a talent with words...here again the flow runs through from start to finish without faltering once....thank you Herbert for another enjoyable read...10+++...Fi

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