Sunday, November 22, 2009

Rhyme Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rhyme me said the write
Even in your day light
As well as your dark night
On this sheet of white
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Anju Addanki 29 November 2009

a simple cute makes u smile and happy poem

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Eyan Desir 24 November 2009

Well the poem is sure smiling with its white teeth now....good write

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Joseph Poewhit 23 November 2009

Title fits the poem well.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 22 November 2009

The poem Rhyme rhymes well

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Janell Cressman 22 November 2009

awesome, i love this one, this is a very smart write, i really like it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Marieta Maglas 22 November 2009

wonderful simile: ''To make hearts fly like kite '' wonderful poem, lovely rhymes 10+++++++

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 22 November 2009

Rhyme me with a divine light so false world can disappear from my sight.......a good write..

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