Sunday, November 13, 2005

Rhubarb - Senryu Comments

Rating: 4.7

Hear some chattering
It's rhubarb, rhubarb, rhubarb
Tart - teeth chatter too!
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Ernestine Northover
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Adeeb Alfateh 17 June 2019

Hear some chattering It's rhubarb, rhubarb, rhubarb Tart - teeth chatter too! amazing great 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Georgios Venetopoulos 24 July 2017

I like it. Strange and poetic.

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Andrew Blakemore 23 July 2009

Very nice with custard! Lovely little senryu, love, Andy xx

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Duncan Wyllie 05 May 2006

A great find within rhubarb rind, Love duncan

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Simon Whild 16 November 2005

Love it, Ernestine. these poems are only seventeen sylables long, but are deceptively difficult to write.

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Uriah Hamilton 14 November 2005

nothing like bitter rhubarb.

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