Wednesday, October 9, 2024
Rhenish Rhapsody Comments
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Misty fingers extend from my forceful streams or
as if the birth of clouds was Neptune's matter
Reaching out for all the rusty ships passing by
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
09 October 2024
the misty fingers of the my forceful streams...the rusting keels of greed, the gladdening glaciers..the global waters turn into 'a vital line' for everyone..Good
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9/2/2025 10:19:00 PM # 1.0.0
2) the repetion of the 'g' syllable in the second and third stanzas is superb. enjoyed. In Sanskrit poetry, this trope is celebrated as 'ANUPRASAM'...
Thank you dear fellow poet, I am happy to read you enjoyed this g-experiment. Also, I learned from you many things, today one more thing: Malayalam 'Anuprasam' for alliteration, thank you.