Rhapsody Of Me Comments

Well crafted, with clever verses. I give it a 9+ as a starting point. (Hate can kill as well, you should have written the last line in a LESS absolute way, or in an indirect way) . But you have many prospects in Poetry, dear young poet Grace Tan

what a lovely.......lovely piece...........i'm tangling above...........

Excellent poem Grace, you are right of course to a point when you say it is not hate that kills but love. I agree somewhat with that statement in terms of a relationship between two people which I feel is the depiction here in this lovely poem, however hate does kill as we all know when we look at past happenings in the world. I think then it's equal to not only assume but to state that both emotions can definitely kill. Thankyou for yet another wonderful poem Grace. --Melvina--

Grace, the last two lines of this poem says it all, That it’s not hate that kills But love. You are so right there. Great poem. Thanks for sharing it. David