A swarm of stars stirred plummeting
Beneath the ebony high tides
And August air was trembling
With carnal heat and vernal pride
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Wild imagination, rich expressions, in a well written piece. Nice to read your words after a long gap.
A poem of the surrealistic genre where irrational images are blended together. For me it is always difficult to explicate such poems! Images like 'summer's thirsty humid paws' 'ebony high tides', 'carnal heat', 'bars of clay'..... all very powerful and suggestive images! I would love if the poet could explain what all he has meant! All I know is that only a poet of calibre can write such a poem!