Thursday, March 22, 2018

Reza Syllabic Verse - Unconditional Love Comments

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In my blue sky you are the only star
I am an ordinary planet,
Bound to orbit you at a speed
When you orbit the other,
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Muzahidul Reza
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Great Reader 23 March 2018

Unconditional Love a great written with great imagery, thanks for the poem

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Fiadh Fida 22 March 2018

A great poem of unconditional love, loved it

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 March 2018

From your poet's note I knew about ''Reza syllabic Verse It is six lines poem; having syllables meters 10,9,8,7,6, and 5 top to bottom. Syllables may be stressed or unstressed. Rhyme schemes are: iambic; ababcc; ababcd; abbacc; aabbcc (on any one) I found your poem in this system. It is a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Muzahidul Reza 22 March 2018

In my blue sky you are the only star I am an ordinary planet, Bound to orbit you at a speed When you orbit the other, But accompany me Simply that all see.

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