Revolution, And Snow Comments

[the cry of humanity lost in the gunfire and the snow] I like this line, , excellent penning! ! !

[the cry of humanity lost in the gunfire and the snow] I like this line, , excellent penning! ! !

If you can make the reader feel the snow and cold and total fear you have made the grade to be called poet Eric; I felt all of this and more. Excellent piece. Regards. Craig

[the cry of humanity lost in the gunfire and the snow] I like this line, , excellent penning! ! !

very nice....................................................................