Revolution Comments

Great potentials I see in you...great work. Your are indeed years ahead of your peers. I luv ur lines, shows great knowledge of world affairs..kudos

So so great a poem not just for a 15 year old but for any poet. Still wonder at how you managed to match all those lines and yet make sense in every sentence. Lovely poem indeed, it reminded me of Tracy Chapman's 'Talkin' of a revolution' song. Keep it up Alicia.

I love your poem Alicia, you are a very talented writer and i hope you do well [3

You are so right! This is an amazing poem.

i love this poem and you are a great poet.. i add you to my favorites!

An in depth retrospection to the hidden rebel in your heart; ignited and ready to enlighten the world with a message! ! !

a beautiful and poignant write.

Wonderful poem, I like it. Friend, can I humbly ask you to read my poem revolution in evolution and tears of a soldier. Please

This straight from your heart isn't? your words are elegant. God is on the throne showing mercy to this world his creation. Keep up the good work my fellow poetess. (8

Very well writtten, I was asking questions while reading, it was a great read.! (:

O.M.G........FOR THE FIRST TIME I SEE WHAT WE DO IN REVOLUTION AND MY DEAR ALICIA YOU ARE ABSOLUTELY RIGHT, TRULY IMAGE AND FAR AS I CAN SEE WHAT WE DO IN REVOLUTION AND WHAT WE DO ON WAR IT'S THE SAME ALICIA LET ME YOU TELL YOU THAT YOU ARE A TRUE POET I LIKE THIS PICE OF WORK A LOT IT'S WONDERFUL KEEP WRITING MY DEAR

Revolution is not a bed of roses. Bullets or stellar couldn't save our souls. Peace couldn't born from the end of blades and mortars. You care and compassionate enough to say these prayers. Well done! ! ! ! !