Saturday, March 28, 2009

***revolution*** Comments

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Fidelity & allegiance
Deforms into fetters of servitude
Through the years of a reign.
Idealism seeks pyres,
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Arijit Kumar
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Atul Sharma 29 March 2009

You have given most of the really clear reasons of revolutions. You also have used good techniques of writing free verse. Great poem. I think there had been a good revolution in your mind before you wrote this.

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Arijit Kumar

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