Revive Comments

nothing easy the feeling of good bye.... too sad to carry on, but so real and comun too....

Nice piece: the poet's heart searches for the new fountain of eternity. Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

Nice praise based on God's love. The poem revives, it keeps us alive in the poet's heart and searches to find the new fountain of eternity. Bravo. Go ahead, my poet. Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

Very Beautiful! I am so glad that God's love is everlasting. We never have to say goodbye :) Hugs~

Hello.... Goodbye.... This poem...... is fine =] good work

A very well thought out poem, embracing all the bad things in your life knowing they are about to change, 10 Lynda xx

Beautifully Sad an ending, but not the end.......10

Ammmmmmazing composition/flow of verses/thoughts indeed......10

This is so very beautifully expressed poem....I really enjoyed reading it....10

very touchy words and phases you have used. hello and good bye are 2 extremes of life and inbetween these lines we are boubd to survive.

The hello's and goodbye's, beginning and end, the cycle of life and emotions...wonderfully written. a 10.

A powerful write! Very well executed, a pleasure to read! Best wishes Shiraz! 10 Fried Thad

Mesmerising and reviving.Good work Persian.

fantastic poem, i like your style of writing, keep going Remember Don't let anyone tell you they sky's your limit Ive seen footprints on the moon :)

I like it... you used a great combination of nature and poetry to make a fantastic poem thank you for telling me to read it

Very beautiful and poignant.wonderful rhyme all the way through aten from me, too

this is sad and hopefull at the same time....I find myself both touched and revived by it...great work

Goodbye the yellow leaves of my heart Goodbye the shady side of my art Hello the new fountain of eternity Revive .................................................... Surprising poems, It is poems as invisible a rainbow in heart... 10... Tsira

lovely revival the centre of all ++++++++10 as always regards anjali

Sometimes everything appears as if it was at the end. Hopefuly, it sometimes is only a (false) feeling... And if not, revival is the best way of (re) acting. A true answer to hard feelings.10+