Thursday, August 9, 2012

Revisited: When The Carousel Animals Got Loose.....[long; Humor; Fantasy; Adventure] Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the park for peoples' amusement……
were some workers with an accusement.
T'was on the merry-go-round
where they were all found,
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Bri Edwards
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Bri Edwards 24 February 2023

Come on people, get together, .....and READ THIS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ;)))))))))))))))

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Bri Edwards 01 October 2022

I give five stars. ;))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) Someone has to.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 14 March 2022

A fun adventure, Bri! For you five stars, say I.

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Bri Edwards 17 April 2022

Thanks, pal. ;) bri

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Simone Inez Harriman 18 July 2018

Where are all the comments? I love this poem.....your word choice and a fascinating concept. This one goes straight to my favourites and a zillion 10's bestowed on your creative masterpiece.

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Bri Edwards 17 April 2022

I concur, Simone. WHERE are they? ? ? ! ! ! ;) bri

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Akhtar Jawad 18 December 2015

Dear Bri, I think there were more mammals, at least seven, enjoyed this interesting poem.

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