Tuesday, October 2, 2007

**[revised 11-19-09] Getting Through October And Beyond Comments

Rating: 3.2

What was it about October
That made us think
Spring would not be coming back?
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Tom J. Mariani
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Amy Louise Kerswell 23 November 2007

Im not sure that really understand the concept of the poem but it is a good one

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Hans Ostrom 05 November 2007

Nicely done-direct and plain-spoken, with a great last line.

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Walter Durk 01 November 2007

Very nicely written Tom, I like this poem. It concisely brings to mind the seasons.

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David Harris 22 October 2007

Tom I like the visual effect that you have shown us here. The imagery is so clear and crisp like October normally is. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Tom J. Mariani

Tom J. Mariani

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