Wednesday, October 7, 2015

Reverse Song Of Eternity Comments

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The most fertile soil was in your arms
The most sweltering sun in your trunk
The brightest sunshine in your eyes
Watching me with passion in your lurk
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Afrooz Jafarinoor
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Roseann Shawiak 07 October 2015

Interesting concept reversing idea of life and death. Intriguing imagery. I love this line: Preparing for the flight of death over it's territory That is borderless! Really great poem! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 08 October 2015

Superstition inspired this, you know! I'm glad it worked! Thank you!

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