Sunday, April 11, 2010

Reversal Comments

Rating: 4.0

to- Start At The End.
this all makes sense for you,
how to read this poem,
After all you figured out,
...
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Cabaline xxx
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Ruth Fairlamb 11 April 2010

This is such a clever litlle verse. You cannot improve it. it is perfect! BTW I note that my 'Ball-shaped' version of your poem did go 'pear-shaped' when I submitted it. I had carefully used the space-bar to push all the lines along till they formed a sphere. but when I submitted it they just went back to left-alignment There is no centre alignment button on this page, but maybe you can see how it works anyway. I would give you an 8 for 'ONE DAY' I give you a ten for 'Reversal'

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