This is such a clever litlle verse. You cannot improve it. it is perfect!
BTW I note that my 'Ball-shaped' version of your poem did go 'pear-shaped' when I submitted it. I had carefully used the space-bar to push all the lines along till they formed a sphere. but when I submitted it they just went back to left-alignment There is no centre alignment button on this page, but maybe you can see how it works anyway. I would give you an 8 for 'ONE DAY' I give you a ten for 'Reversal'
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This is such a clever litlle verse. You cannot improve it. it is perfect! BTW I note that my 'Ball-shaped' version of your poem did go 'pear-shaped' when I submitted it. I had carefully used the space-bar to push all the lines along till they formed a sphere. but when I submitted it they just went back to left-alignment There is no centre alignment button on this page, but maybe you can see how it works anyway. I would give you an 8 for 'ONE DAY' I give you a ten for 'Reversal'