A cool winter dawn silently
Sneaks into my musty room
Dispelling darkness, carrying
Away night's eerie gloom
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a wonderful picture you paint with your words..... The sun comes to set its mark Waking me up from a reverie that I have to attend my day's work........ beautiul work....
A splendid reverie, indeed, of a beautiful morning. I believe you have gathered all of the beauty of the morning, and arranged it here in thoughtful stanzas of peace and light. Bravo, good poet.
The soft shining beauty of the winter morning reflects through your poem.To quote from the poem- - - - Waking up I come out to Hum my morning prayer Looking at sky where from The winter is going to bare
I am glad you liked the poem. Honored. Thanks.