Tuesday, May 5, 2015

Revenge Version 1. Comments

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Revenge.

I held a grudge so tight as if my life depended on it,
I yearned for the day that my Revenge would come,
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bimisola Babalola
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Chinedu Dike 05 May 2015

Indeed revenge is like poison, a terrible negative emotion that deprives one peace of mind. Forgiveness is by far a more fulfilling emotion than revenge. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing and for your comment on my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.

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thank you very much, your comment is appreciated.

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