My love you're a crime scene I've planned from afar,
You don't know it yet..but my darling..you are.
Each morning you wake and lock the bathroom door,
and start humming tunes that I know you adore.
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Lodigiana still a great flowing poem to reread with your most wicked pay-off. And if you get the time please try to read a lost poem given to me I put up written by Phyllis McCormack called Crabbit Old Woman...What do you see nurse, What do you see? It is written echoing identically your gifted style and original approach. With a superb heartfelt moral message pay-off for the lucky reader. 5 stars and take care. Shaun.x.
Lodigiana, a dead-sure classic to be reread again and again, time after devious time. Dark and funny all at the same time written by a poetess with that little bit of extra magic, that touch of class that shines not sparkles. 10++ again and thank you for your recent kind and generous comments. And simply take care Lodigiana. Shaun. x
Superbly written poem Lodigiana, brilliantly imagined and delivered. So thoroughly entertaining. Loved it! You could become poetry's Agatha Christie. No sequel...Coffee with a hint of almonds.10++ and safely tucked away in my locked poetry cabinet out of children's reach. Thanks again.
.I love the idea of being deviously cunning! ! ! ..maybe I should refrain from making anyone a cup o' tea for a while though! ! Thank you so much for your really lovely comments..so generous! Lodigiana x
Wow! What a poem. Bittersweet but truly a shared experience for more than one heart. Thank you Poetess.10+++++++
As you say..bittersweet..hopefully more in the imagination than in reality.! Thanks so much for reading Chris!
I am happy that this is just fiction though! thank you for reading x
A challenging sad experience, put in nicely crafted words embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment- much appreciated
Thanks so much Shaun..as you know I love a little bit of devilment Really love the fact that you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. Thanks so much my friend! Lodigiana xx