Thursday, November 3, 2005

Revenge Of The Nipples Comments

Rating: 4.8

You sit there in front of me
legs spread across the girth
of a double seat
arms folded against your chest
...
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Sheila Knowles
COMMENTS
Ernestine Northover 08 November 2005

Perhaps Sheila, you ought to buy some 'hub caps' for those, they will obviously be in need some sort of protection! ! ! ! ! ! ! They are clearly titillating in the extreme. Sincerely Ernestine

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Uriah Hamilton 04 November 2005

Bravo to every cold-pointy nipple!

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Cj Heck 03 November 2005

Pure genius, Sheila! I loved it! Warmest regards, CJ

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Poetry Hound 03 November 2005

A scrumptiously deliciously hilarious poem. Nice one(s) .

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Alice Vedral Rivera 03 November 2005

Loved 'poked through your inflated ego'. avr

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 03 November 2005

LOL! ! ! This is such a cool poem Sheila...I had good laugh! !

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David Nelson Bradsher 03 November 2005

This is great, Sheila. What a great sense of humor (and sarcasm) you have, my friend. Love this.

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