Monday, September 26, 2011

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The darkness of his smile
Brings agony to his thoughts
His words cut deep in
As if they were millions of shards of glass,
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Nicole Middendorf
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Stefanie Fontker 26 September 2011

Very beautiful. Your poetry is very beautiful. One little suggestion perhaps? To correct your misspelling of 'axe? ' Then it will be almost perfect.

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Nicole Middendorf

Nicole Middendorf

Candyland, Mars (Delano, Minnesota)
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