Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Revelations, Sobering Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was only one more pebble on the shore.
I was only one more star in the sky.
When the eternal wind, cosmic or terrestrial
Stellar or sober, blew, blew like the last call
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Rani Turton
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Marieta Maglas 24 May 2009

Comparisons like: ''sober, blew, blew like the last call'' and extended metaphors like: ''I was the cosmic dust and the desert gloom'' make this a wonderful poem.''My window is the world'' is the key phrase of this poem.10++

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