Friday, August 8, 2008

Revelation (Part One) Comments

Rating: 2.5

Do you really exist
my dream of a soul mate?
I feel you,
as i feel the fresh breeze in my face
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christopher murphy
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Tanya Stanford 30 August 2008

The one can only be told by time. Well done. Lovely write

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Joseph Poewhit 15 August 2008

Poem has a quiet beauty to it.

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Brandon Dugan 08 August 2008

amazing i really liked your descriptions :)

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