Wednesday, January 16, 2013

Revelation Comments

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On a dusty morning,
I sit in my chair,
In the public library.
Reading, discovering,
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Justin Chan
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Justin Chan 16 January 2013

Thanks :) I used raw inspiration to write this, so it may seem... Rough

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Xelam Kan™ 16 January 2013

Not bad......... seems a run-on discourse.....Flow is good Infact some memories of the past have lasting fragrance and shine....

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