Revelation Comments

keep the selected feelings For the perpetuation of love moments, And I feel the light, That absorbs the darkness.... divine feeling at the particular moments with removal of darkness fromthe life..lovely poem and i appreciate it....10 read mine what happens if..... what do i seek

I can see the light of a burning candle, I can see the drops of its wax and light, Near that incurable sadness, Generated by the death of loved. a great piece from a rich poem of perfect poet marieta..who knows how to make good poems...this poem is also one of her best work.. explanatory style of writing but with a deep thoughtful idea.. really a good and heart ouching job.. well done friend marieta...10/10

A touchingly passionate poem. Its obvious your words are deeply felt and the imagery is beautiful as i saw the scene as you portrayed it. Very well done and thank you for sharing :)

From : Deborah Cromer (United States ;) To : Marieta Maglas Date Time : 6/6/2009 3: 12: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Revelation Your last line' And I feel the light, That absorbs the darkness, is awesome. Intense, and highly done. It made me think. I went there, to find the feeling. What I felt like, feeling the light, absorbing darkness. Good work. You have powerful words too. Deborah Cromer

I see the light that abosrbs the dark. what an imagination from poet.Yes masterly stroke and mesasge to tohe mankind....10

excellent....you have an uncanny knack of relating imagery to the depths of emotions. thank you very much.

Hauntingly beautiful. Vivid imagery presents a glowing scenerio - one of inner contemplation and understanding. A deeply introspective write - brilliant! Linda :)

excellent poem nice use of words i like this

In ascesis. I keep the selected feelings For the perpetuation of love moments, And I feel the light, That absorbs the darkness.... just boooooooooooooooootiful