' Revelation Comments

Beneath the veil where truth lies, This person that I am Beneath your gaze - exposed; Yes Linda I'm begining to decode the message :)

thank you Linda, a really enjoyable read. i connected so well with this poem. Chris

''No longer am I invisible - The complexities of my inner mind Unraveled, as the thread once coiled Loosens beneath your touch; '' I didn't read before something like this. It is wonderful.10++

I like these lines 'A soul within a soul are we Unfolding, as a blooming rose That seeks the warmth of the sun............ Aroused from ancient slumber.' nice one...very refreshing..helps to relax the sore mind with love shan

Hi Linda This one caught my eye. Another one that draws you in and keeps you there. Your words have such depth intimacy, and feeling that it cries out for a second read. Love is so often written about, so new poems need to be original. This has originality in abundance. I've written a song about it below: Tral la la.....Love it........Chorus.......refrain. Steve

Really dedicated to the depth of intimacy, love care and emotion all are there, nice piece,10+

truly a spectacular write.. u are amazing

Uniquely spiritual...yet....at once...sensual! A real feel good effort. Excellent composition.