You can brake
Breath relieved
Look around, see perfection
Observe nifty scenes in motion
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Ananda, this sounds as if your a bit upset with yourself. I don't know why when you write such lovely verse like this. Lovely flow that just kept me reading until the end. Big 10 from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David
It exudes your unfathomable potential to creat magic with words Please read my poems and advise