Thursday, May 10, 2007

Revelation Comments

Rating: 5.0

You can brake
Breath relieved
Look around, see perfection
Observe nifty scenes in motion
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Ananda Alves
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Tarapada Mohapatra 04 November 2007

It exudes your unfathomable potential to creat magic with words Please read my poems and advise

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David Harris 10 May 2007

Ananda, this sounds as if your a bit upset with yourself. I don't know why when you write such lovely verse like this. Lovely flow that just kept me reading until the end. Big 10 from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Ananda Alves

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