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When you search silence
Inside your heart
But hear nothing but screams
That's when you know it all
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People have defined life in various ways. Here I find one more wonderful definition of life... it's an absurd theorem... liked it.
Beautiful, enigmatic as Nosheen's poems often are. Top score. Myfav
I'm glad you took the time to pen this spur of the moment poem. Sometimes they are the best but so easily lost if not written in the moment!
Just loved it! And our gratuitous complications explain why we, like children undo the few things we get right, ' even if we still love life, with all our might'.
Congratulations because it certainly, knocked the ball out of the park! Deep and far reaching it turned out to be deep, yet very pleasant and with truths about life and us, that we should not doubt.
Life's complications, that paradox that some live that causes pain, confusion and sometimes hope as expressed in your excellent poem.
Your conclusion in this brilliant poem, dear Nosheen, is crystal clear. It IS human to love complications. Very right.5 Stars and to my Favourites. I always enjoy reading your poems.
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7/18/2025 3:13:25 AM # 1.0.0
In the spur of these moments is when we find a way among all this chaos. Brilliant poem Nosheen.