Monday, September 17, 2012

Reunion Comments

Rating: 5.0

After several summers, we met again
In the still slumbering morning light
Looking at each other in dazed silence
With the delectable kick of an evanescent dream.
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 October 2019

After several summers, we met again In the still slumbering morning light Looking at each other in dazed silence With the delectable kick of an evanescent dream......a delightful beginning with fantastic expression. This poem reveals the past memories of childhood with magic spell. Amusing to read. Brilliant poem. Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem..

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Rajnish Manga 29 November 2018

After several summers, we met again ....Gazing at each other, dumb we stood ....Two travellers at a wayside inn ....With the past trampled under our feet.....// What a graphic portrayal! ! A chunk of life.... so heart touching.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 17 January 2015

Great reminiscence narrated with touching words and culminated in great reunion......Valsa.......amazing write as always.....10

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Karen Sinclair 30 September 2012

Beautifully put and just so perfectly honest.... it is a shock sometimes when we bump into old friends but as we get older i think we learn how to approach and accept the truth....tyvm karen

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Anita Sehgal 28 September 2012

The present sneering at our face And the future hovering above our heads. what an expression.. great read

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Elena Sandu 27 September 2012

You described so well here the time travel happening when we meet our childhood friends! Memories from far in the past are to be revived, the feeling of being a child again comes like a magic spell by the heart and eyes of old time friends.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 21 September 2012

An amazing poem which brings back memories of old.It touches the heart.Great write.THANKS.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 20 September 2012

we have observed such changes in our relatives and friends, even after a few years of separation, when we return back home, so far I have not met any of my primary school buddies. very well written poem!

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Danny Draper 19 September 2012

A fine poem or a reunion an the honest and aghast surprised looks and shock when meeting and invigorated outcome and rejuvenation after. Terrific.

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It is a reunion of a century of our present.These lines must enliven the minds of the oldies who are at times given to the debacles of ailments, woes, semi isolation and growing pessimism. The teeming of apt vocabulary and all pervading intensity of thoughts make the piece a superb write!

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Valerie Dohren 17 September 2012

Brilliant Valsa, makes me feel young again!

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