Return To The Intimate Roots Of Our Own Being. Comments

I like the uneven length of paragraphs and lines. It flows very well.

Another amen to the truth of this poem. This, I think, is at the root of psychosocial behavior. On the craft of this poem, I like its shape, Tony. I wonder about the last two lines. Could you write to me a bit more of what you mean? May we rest in love. Glen

Love is the basic need of all, beautifully written

A wonderful write on the power of love. Love indeed is supreme. A lovely, mystical write. A10