Wednesday, December 23, 2009

Return To Eden...... Comments

Rating: 5.0

There lives a dream in Her heart of a beautiful garden
a secret sacred garden.

She wants to be filled with lush green
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seemakhera (Aanamika 805)
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 24 December 2009

This beautiful poem is a painful cry against pollution. Will we ever listen our Mother Earth's cry? This is really a heart-wrenching poem, aanamika, and I add my voice to your voice though no hope to be listened by this greedy world. I wrote many poems on pollution too. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and a beautiful soul behind these thoughts...10/10. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Raj Nandy 23 December 2009

A nice thoughtful poem! Ever since Adam & Eve got banished from the Garden of Eden, the world gradually started to become polluted! Pollution starts in the hearts and minds of people first, and then spreads on to the environment around! -Raj

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Afzal Shauq 23 December 2009

a heart touching and soul kissing poem is this one... well doe 10/10

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Afzal Shauq 23 December 2009

a heart touching and soul kissing poem is this one... well doe 10/10

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Afzal Shauq 23 December 2009

a heart touching and soul kissing poem is this one... well doe 10/10

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Afzal Shauq 23 December 2009

a heart touching and soul kissing poem is this one... well doe 10/10

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Afzal Shauq 23 December 2009

a heart touching and soul kissing poem is this one... well doe 10/10

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Nikunj Sharma 23 December 2009

hey this is really an ice and touching poem, relevant too as we ignore her in our daily chores. I am making some suggestions through a mesage. just read it and make corrections if you like....overall a very powerful theme and flow

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