Return Of The Crow Comments

This is very good. I somehow knew there will be poets writing in this uncomplicated style. I also invite you to read my poems particularly, Tiring Day.

Revenge is sweetest when served cold. Nice piece here.

Interesting concept, interesting poem, made me think and I like that.

I am fond of this one as well Dave. You are a very accomplished writer.

this is the poem i have ever read in my life this is so beautiful so beautiful

Interesting tale.

Love th' enemy, 'tis th' hard revenge! ! ! A g'd poem! ! !

Nice poem. You're right about revenge.

Great write. Brilliant finish. One to read time and time again. Put in shame, is the best revenge.

wow what a nice poem i like the last part, keep it up.

Revenge is sweet, but not wise. Though sometimes it would be great to do unto others what they do unto us. Very passionate poem...

This poem is phenomenal, I love the flow, and shere genius of the imagery, very impressive write. :)

Go! it's time to revenge revenge is the best feeling of all you feel the strengh in and justice you make your own don't waiting for some stupid divine justice it will never stop your thirst Godd poem Dave

Three bullets in my back....is that you got back-stabbed for 3x? For me..Spirit must close to soul...it make consciousness alive 'Peter', had this before? and ask you to seek revenge? ? I guess rise like a crow is good but revenge for that...hmmm not good because we wont change past either, but we are stronger than ever Turn them to sand, wont bury the dark past...but sure nature of life The bullets shot on you will turn back like boomerang right to their chest Just rebirth your life into armor feather, my Crow! ! _Unwritten Soul

Salvation ('moksha') still far from sight.. Revenge still presented as duty ('karma') .. No escape from cycles of births and deaths! ! ! Crow depicting free spirit.. Adept transcendent exposition.

Karma rides a dark horse! great poem!