You came
In my afternoon
As a flying cloud-
Dense and thick with
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Never did I anticipate In such a tender age, you'd Kindle within me, an urge to live In every inch of the space around. A very nice and satisfying composition. Thanks for the share.10 for it.
You came In my greenless garden As a singing bird With albums of songs Melancholic and thrilling Filled me from within with hopes Worth being echoed in heart- - - - Wow- -Stunningly beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.
You came In my soundless desert As an oasis of lyrics- Sweet and inspiring Full of enthusiasm Worth being listened to. Beautiful poem with nice stanzas. Thanks.
You cameIn my green less gardenAs a singing birdWith albums of songs-Melancholic and thrilling, Filled me from within with hopesWorth being echoed within heart. Beautiful work Sir. Would love to read this poem again and again. Thanks for the poem.
Thanks dear Rimi..for your lovely remarks and frequent visiting. Regards. Subhas
I was both delighted and shocked as well at these lines... Never did I anticipate In such a tender age, you'd Kindle within me, an urge to live In every inch of the space around. Has anything happened in between Sir? However. beautiful and great work.10 for the poem. Seems Devi.
Nothing so intimate dear..Its all about the pleasure Divine which Muni herself rendered in my dry life.
You came In my green less garden As a singing bird With albums of songs- Melancholic and thrilling, Filled me from within with hopes Worth being echoed within heart. Thank you for sharing this poem 10+++