Sunday, July 17, 2011

Return My Childhood Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I get a chance to bargain
Will ask the Almighty again;
‘O God! If thy really could
Give me back my childhood.
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S.D. TIWARI
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Anshul Gupta 19 August 2011

That's a great poem. Wonderful feeling...

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 17 July 2011

Munshi Durga Sahai 'Suroor' wrote a poem on childhood in Urdu. He expressed the same feelings. And you did it in English. Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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