Thursday, September 6, 2012

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I'm mesmerized; the rush of foamy ocean wave
Stare at the horizon; tip toe so deep, so brave
Dare tread deeper on the rocks and shells
Suddenly to my neck a salty brew now wells
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Arthur Weil
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Leslie Philibert 07 September 2012

Like this, well written, nice structure, solid rhymes, good poem!

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