Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, November 18, 2009

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I may not withdraw from the race
Even if I have to face shame on face
Any one can follow me and trace
Foot steps on the sand with equal pace
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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warner treuter 25 November 2009

In answer to what poem seems to be or could be about, Mostly, we do what we do because we are free to do it, though often undecidedly.

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Joseph Poewhit 21 November 2009

Discretion is the better part of valor

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Kareem Hany 20 November 2009

nice poem.. with good rythme i think.. i guess it's a retreat in the right time but with slow motion.. am not sure i felt it like that

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Marieta Maglas 19 November 2009

It is to be acknowledged and accept with grace wonderful abstract poem 10++++++++++

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Lady Grace 18 November 2009

this is nicely done....retreat...hmmm..hope u will not...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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