Retrace Comments

Great piece! Beautifully worded.

So enjoyed this poetic story. There is a lot of 'soul', to the write! Wonderful! D

Thanks for your poem. The only way to stay the flow of the river is to float upon it. But the heart will not allow us to leave our loved ones behind, Unless you take them along for the ride.

nostalgic memories of good old days

playing in the rain fantastic! you write from the heart