Friday, April 3, 2009

Retrace Comments

Rating: 5.0

Trills of the birds
Arouse him up in the morn.
The feeling of lethargy
Restrains him from getting up of his comfort
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Nooruddeen Mathilakathveetil
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Zie Marquez 11 October 2010

Great piece! Beautifully worded.

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So enjoyed this poetic story. There is a lot of 'soul', to the write! Wonderful! D

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Barry Reiter 12 April 2010

Thanks for your poem. The only way to stay the flow of the river is to float upon it. But the heart will not allow us to leave our loved ones behind, Unless you take them along for the ride.

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Nalini Hebbar 10 October 2009

nostalgic memories of good old days

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Carol Gall 28 May 2009

playing in the rain fantastic! you write from the heart

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