“It is time to call of the day”
Let all the professional activities die away
Gradually and slowly to be distanced
As I was offered retirement and silenced
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Good choice of vocabulary, satisfying rhythmic beat. Liz Dan4 minutes ago Effectively illustrates the shift of change from employment to retirement, attempting to embrace a new mentality.4 stars. Comment +1
“It is time to call of the day” Let all the professional activities die away Gradually and slowly to be distanced
amazing use of quatrains Jordan Dumer12 minutes ago It was a very pleasurable poem about a how your life is now. Great use of the word time in the second half of the poem. I also really enjoyed the word play. Thanks for sharing.