Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, January 26, 2014

Retirement Comments

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“It is time to call of the day”
Let all the professional activities die away
Gradually and slowly to be distanced
As I was offered retirement and silenced
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 January 2014

amazing use of quatrains Jordan Dumer12 minutes ago It was a very pleasurable poem about a how your life is now. Great use of the word time in the second half of the poem. I also really enjoyed the word play. Thanks for sharing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 January 2014

Good choice of vocabulary, satisfying rhythmic beat. Liz Dan4 minutes ago Effectively illustrates the shift of change from employment to retirement, attempting to embrace a new mentality.4 stars. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 January 2014

very nice malenky malenky5 minutes ago good work

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Gajanan Mishra 26 January 2014

place is fixed, use and enjoy, I like it sir.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 January 2014

“It is time to call of the day” Let all the professional activities die away Gradually and slowly to be distanced

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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