Retaliation Of Truth And Commonsense Comments

This sounds as if you are a sinister force working against the rest of us, that you are enlightened while the rest are naive. It'll be interesting to see how that works out. Another great write! ! ! I really love your imagery.

This is a real expounded poem of discontent Jack. A couple typos but who cares? All I can say is, we all see life differently and I am glad I see it, my way, cus yours seems a very lonely dark place, where I could never wish to stay. Good poem though. 10 from Tai, always looking positively, no matter which way!