Saturday, May 20, 2017

Resurrection Comments

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Evil in me: Come here and fall in sleep, till you get up in pain,
For having missed the joy of getting drenched in the rain.

Cover your ears, and don't yield to that sound,
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Rehnuma Tarannum
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Chinedu Dike 07 February 2018

Witty reflection well articulated and nicely penned with spiritual insight. Beautiful piece of poetry embellished in beautiful rhyme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Rehnuma and do remain enriched.

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Shimizu Mizuhala 30 June 2017

Angel in me: No, that will be the biggest evil and a barrier to my salvation, I will rise, and fight the dark in me; thats the only way of my resurrection. Angels in our hearts, we are the shadow of the angels. Thank you.

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Rehnuma Tarannum 05 June 2017

Thanks to all of you for all your comments, inspiration and good wishes. it was beyond my expectation. thanks to all of you for being so supportive.

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B.m. Biswas 02 June 2017

Though morality and didactic attitudes are always not recommended by groups namely arts for art sake... Your verse balances both artistic presentation and the intended message..... super title and the picture included...... Congratulations.... S. Nurul.

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 June 2017

Dear Poet, Congratulations! This beautiful poem with a message to humanity, deserves the recognition. Your poems are well written, with exquisite rhyme and meter, most aptly worded. Directly communicating with the reader. That is how poems have to be. Well done.10+++ Keep writing and sharing...

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Akhtar Jawad 02 June 2017

I will rise, and fight the dark in me; that's the only way of my resurrection. A poem of lovely thoughts and it's with entire perfection. Congrats.

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Savita Tyagi 02 June 2017

So full of depth. Salvation lies beyond good and evil. It is the essence of Geeta. Loved that photograph!

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 June 2017

In the dark of the night! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Really deep portrayal of the duality in human nature...a ten congratulations on being selected poet of the day..

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Pranab K Chakraborty 02 June 2017

Don't try to feel alive, and stay behind the shade, Don't feed your soul, but count yourself among the dead...................................... Who can, is the happiest person in the world. No necessity of resurrecting soul any more. Just live and live like a dead man.... it's the immediate destination to meet for the man living in this civilization...... Thanks.

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Yes, it is my own determination which will fight the darkness.So convincing.!

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Christina Simmons 02 June 2017

Such a well written poem; I thoroughly got it. Well done for penning together this insightful piece. Congratulation for being seen as worthy poet of the day.

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Bharati Nayak 02 June 2017

A call to conscience to stay away from evil and be on the right track.- - A great poem, thanks for sharing.

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Tom Allport 02 June 2017

a poem of trying to subdue mixed thoughts in order to find a better way to survive? superbly written

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Rajnish Manga 02 June 2017

Where kindness and honesty are dead and spirituality is in ruins... I will rise, and fight the dark in me; thats the only way of my resurrection. @@@ Great poem with a profound philosophical message- stay clear of traps on the way. Thanks.

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Kim Barney 02 June 2017

A fascinating poem, Rehnuma. Congratulations for having it chosen as poem of the day!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 June 2017

Rise and fight the dark.... a big 10++++++

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