Evil in me: Come here and fall in sleep, till you get up in pain,
For having missed the joy of getting drenched in the rain.
Cover your ears, and don't yield to that sound,
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Angel in me: No, that will be the biggest evil and a barrier to my salvation, I will rise, and fight the dark in me; thats the only way of my resurrection. Angels in our hearts, we are the shadow of the angels. Thank you.
Thanks to all of you for all your comments, inspiration and good wishes. it was beyond my expectation. thanks to all of you for being so supportive.
Though morality and didactic attitudes are always not recommended by groups namely arts for art sake... Your verse balances both artistic presentation and the intended message..... super title and the picture included...... Congratulations.... S. Nurul.
Dear Poet, Congratulations! This beautiful poem with a message to humanity, deserves the recognition. Your poems are well written, with exquisite rhyme and meter, most aptly worded. Directly communicating with the reader. That is how poems have to be. Well done.10+++ Keep writing and sharing...
I will rise, and fight the dark in me; that's the only way of my resurrection. A poem of lovely thoughts and it's with entire perfection. Congrats.
So full of depth. Salvation lies beyond good and evil. It is the essence of Geeta. Loved that photograph!
In the dark of the night! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Really deep portrayal of the duality in human nature...a ten congratulations on being selected poet of the day..
Don't try to feel alive, and stay behind the shade, Don't feed your soul, but count yourself among the dead...................................... Who can, is the happiest person in the world. No necessity of resurrecting soul any more. Just live and live like a dead man.... it's the immediate destination to meet for the man living in this civilization...... Thanks.
Yes, it is my own determination which will fight the darkness.So convincing.!
Such a well written poem; I thoroughly got it. Well done for penning together this insightful piece. Congratulation for being seen as worthy poet of the day.
A call to conscience to stay away from evil and be on the right track.- - A great poem, thanks for sharing.
a poem of trying to subdue mixed thoughts in order to find a better way to survive? superbly written
Where kindness and honesty are dead and spirituality is in ruins... I will rise, and fight the dark in me; thats the only way of my resurrection. @@@ Great poem with a profound philosophical message- stay clear of traps on the way. Thanks.
A fascinating poem, Rehnuma. Congratulations for having it chosen as poem of the day!
Witty reflection well articulated and nicely penned with spiritual insight. Beautiful piece of poetry embellished in beautiful rhyme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Rehnuma and do remain enriched.